"High (lol) "

You've peddled yourself as a drug...

made me a junky you know, I suffer withdrawl

your skin resin is a killer buzz

and smoking you is far more cost effective

Reviews

[Nisreen]

That sweet addictive partner
That rush

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Thank you for stopping by john

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest, logical and amazing use of words. No weakness in the amazing poetry. I liked this one.
Coyote

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Love is a natural drug. I had lovesick or what eva you want to call it. thanks for sharing this nice poem.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Inside druggie stuff morphs into an erotic cost analysis.
Clever, Lynn!

[V]

I like your use and choice of words, pretty smart and effective, creating something that reads originally. Hm, maybe I'd just leave out lol in the title. I think high expresses it pretty well..

[Asante]

These lines are really, really clever! Loved how this came in as raw as it did: "You've peddled yourself as a drug..."

High on infatuation. :) Dope piece, Lynn.

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hahaha Dope review, Sante :))

[Asante]

My pleasure. :)

[Pete]

Cute. Sounds like a plan as long as you don't overdose. Reminds me of that old song by Robert Palmer - 'Addicted to Love'.

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Thanks so much Pete :)

[Ken Simm.]

Ah the wit it rises as..... as other things do.

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Thank you, Ken :)

[wordman]

ahh ! but the smoke just rises,it never fades away
clever write,you peddled yourself as a drug

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Thank you, Ron