Creation

Whorls beyond timeless

tender silken dreams made flesh

birthing universe

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words. Made to want to know more. Thank you Lynn for sharing your amazing poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

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Thank you, John :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I was glad to have time to read your work. Life keeps me busy and you are welcome.

[Adam Adams]

i really like how "words" play role in people's life. even sometimes, i get amazed to see the analogies of their depth... like when even a lil' character or letter of the word's changed, the whole freaking meaning is utterly distorted by means of ... "what?" -- goodness or badness. for example: your word: "whorls" sound more like "w****s" so if we change or follow up such so-called "CREATION", then let's see how it will or is gonna sound:

"W****S" beyond timeless
tender silken dreams made flesh
birthing universe.

damn! sounds so fascinating.. isn't it? ah.. originally me... b*****d! xoxo

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Laughing....................
Shaking my head...you would

[EvaThornburn]

Nice, interesting write. I found it a pleasure to read. Thanks, so much for sharing.Eva

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Thank you Eva :)

[EvaThornburn]

Your very welcome.

[wordman]

a new twist on creation,it sounds beautiful ,and effortless

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:) thank you I'm glad you liked it

[wordman]

my pleasure

[emmajoy]

Immensely visual - wonderful. A masterpiece painted with only ten strokes.

Thinking.. thinking.. eyes closed... somehow seeing an incredible light.. ..

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It's the light inside you my friend :) I like it when you stop by