Vivacity

Surreal morning tide

rushing wave

kiss for my love

Reviews

[Woody]

to wake up to a morning kiss! mmmm

you have a knack for sweet short poems that speak volumes, m'lady.
lovely one. though I personally would've put "from" my love :)

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Thank you so much woody :)

[Adam Adams]

The word: "vivacious" is itself a very symphonically sadistical word that speaks allot of the theory of crowned night. Liked the short, simplistic, & kinda clear cut diversion or the "vivacity" of your "vivacious" poetry. Great work here!

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ya it's a juicy word isn't it? Thank you for stopping by, Adams

[wordman]

sounds like a sweet love song,you wake with your love
on your mind

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It is a sweet love song :) Thank you, Ron ((you))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and i am sure you brighten his shores as the sun rises.

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Sweet of you to say that, Jacob :)
Thank you...

[David Scott]

Oh how the morning can rush passion upon a kiss...
A great capture of this moment.

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:0 thank you my friend

[andrew mitchell]

Yes high spirits indeed, can read this many ways lynn

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Thanks again, Andrew :)

[andrew mitchell]

i wanted to say something of a more mature nature but......

[roarke]

heh, you had me at Vivacity.....

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Thank you Roarke :)