A Musing of Me

You left poems in me.

The air is pregnant with you;

I feel your lungs expanding

in the ground

as the Maple breathes,

and the salt decides to linger

around me.

And its just like you

to break the silence,

and call me over to see the sky

giving birth

to the other side of your gaze.

You would have written to me

about the paths between the clouds,

the mango glade on which you rest

the sea of purple at your feet.

Reviews

[Miss Sharon]

Awesome! The imagery in this write is so beautiful it brings a tear of joy to my eyes. Thank you. ~Sharon

[ROXANE DORSEY]

you left poems in me and i love it thanks for sharing.

[Lorry]

This is beautiful Lynn, from first line to last and everything in between. So much anguish softly spoken, like a sigh that tried to be held in, but escaped, bringing images flooding into the readers mind of the places you speak of. Superb.

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Thank you so much Nemo, for such a beautiful review

[Wondering Mind]

This is exquisite, lynn. Your Muse must be extremely amused!!

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:) Thank you Wondering!

[emmajoy]

Two words: ABSOLUTE PERFECTION

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Emma, thank you so much. Coming from such talent as yourself...I am honored :)

[Woody]

phew!!!! gee what a beaut! impeccable. that's it, found the right adjective. and I love it.

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:)) Thank you, woody. I will be by to visit in a bit. Good seeing you in my hood

[V]

What a smooth and soft, great choice of words. Really nicely crafted. A joy to read.

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Thank you Vanessa, I am pleased you liked it

[V]

I did. You're welcome.

[Georgina Cross]

Such a beautiful poem, it's very passionate with the miracle of birth and life. Your descriptions stand out from others
'the mango glade on which you rest
the sea of purple at your feet' being my favourite line of the poem.
Lovely work!
Georgie.

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Thank you so much for stopping by :)

[FJ Davis]

Deeply melancholy and intensely loving.
Someone very special has left you, but, obviously, not without the blessed fortification of lovely, soul-sustaining memories.
A gorgeous piece, Lynn!

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Thank you so much, Frank :) Always good seeing you by

[Adam Adams]

A very modern & sadistical version of organ & "orgasm" i come to read through this "diana" write. Very captivating. sensual. passitionately "penetrating" & so "ejaculating" form of art you have transmulated in words. Excellent! Must adore you for the talent you are "causuallly" born & so fair & fine "transfigured" with.

(Giving you 100/100... not for getting a plethora of poetry in you but how artististixall you just dance 'pon ur lovers hearts'. Marvelous!!)

Ps. I find the "old" lynn here in this poetry, so eligant, graceful, kinda typa jeopardy that has this whole widen world under the very raw threat of her Wild Wilde & Wagnour Behaviour. Damn son!! Hi Lynn, mind me leaving some poetry in you? *kidding*

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Your reviews always give me a chuckle :)) Thank you so much Adams