Dark

His dark mood was calm

And with a look in his eyes

That spoke of patience...

Reviews

[jesserose99]

lovely...depicts a depth to his nature with not much room to do so. very well done.

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Thank you, Jesse :)

[Sympathy Heart]

Really great poem For something with few words it speaks so powerfully.

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Thank you, dear poet. Appreciate your time :)

[terry smith]

hurricane season is it....beware the brooding darkened mood evil is afoot

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Hi Terry :) no worries, the sun always rises, my friend

[A. Amos]

Few words said all... Thank you for sharing my friend!

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Thank you Amos, for stopping by and leaving your mark :)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend...

[andrew mitchell]

many facets to this clever write lynn short and sweet to the point. Niiiiiice!

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Thanks again, Andrew :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is like the calm before the storm...right before the explosion (maybe abuse)

the perspective is perfect...and of course the brevity really impacts.

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Thank you Jacob :)

[J]

whoa. such power packed into enviable brevity. one more word added to this would surely diminish its impact. truth be told, i would run run away run away.

ya see, what makes this piece so amazing to me . . . i woulda ruined it w/too many words. my fingers frequently suffer from diarrhea. excellent work, dear poet. scared the 'ell outa me.

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Thank you again J :)

[wordman]

i can see him sitting, and thinking
a few words transforms into many images

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Thank you so much, my friend :)

[wordman]

always a pleasure lynn

[David Scott]

I really identify with this. I'm a very patient person. Yet I find myself feeling the weight of being patient. An odd contradiction. The best times are when you can actually let go and be beyond the cares. This is a more enlightened type of patience... I'm working on it. Be patient with me. Ha.
Fun to read a new thought from your creative mind.

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:0 Thank you, my dear friend

[V]

A very short but somehow intense write. Sometimes one needs only very few words to express a deeper sense of sth. I could easily create an image in my mind. I feel like it's a little cliffhanger poem.

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Thank you for stopping by, dear poet

[V]

You're welcome :)