Porcupine Mountain

I never saw a porcupine,

but I did see a lake, like a cloud, 

resting upon the tops of Pine trees

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what an amazing image....yes, sure looks like a porcupine...

those beautiful reflections...

damn, what a picture you painted with these three lines...

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Thank you, Jacob...good to see you by :)

[Willard Wells]

Very nice imagery in short verse. Well done.

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Thank you Willard. It's a beautiful place with rushing rivers and waterfalls...and a lake seeming resting upon the tops of pines. Water so clear you can see the color of the rocks in the bottom...magical

[Willard Wells]

And that was very nice, but where's the damn picture. hahahaha

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I would have added a picture if I was smart enough to do so lol. I will see if I can get my boy to do it for me sometime soon

[Willard Wells]

hahaha, yep got the kid in the back pocket when technology speeds by and the mind and body is going the other way. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Described the Porcupine Mountain with skill. Create vision and beautiful place. Thank you Lynn for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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Thank you, John :) I have spent a lot of time in the UP. One of my favorite places to be

[Coyote Poetry]

I lived in the U.P for three years. Iron Mountain. It is God's country.

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Yes sir...it sure is :) I love it there

[wordman]

sounds like you was up on the mountain
looking down at the lake ,it would seem like a cloud
and the trees all around mould blend in to the lake

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Ya, exactly, Ron :) It's in the upper peninsula of Michigan. Beautiful place, my friend. Good seeing you by...thank you

[David Scott]

I never thought not seeing could have such clarity to describe.
This could make a perfect card! I can see the picture so clearly.

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Thank you, David. It really was quite spiritual to be there. I guess the pine trees were the porcupines :)

[David Scott]

Yes... I could see it with your eyes here. Nature teaches so many lessons.

[roarke]

gotta lake like that near here, similar, it's got glaciers in it. No porkypines, but there is a concession sellin' pack rat popsicles.....

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hahahaha Roarke, you're awesome. What flavor are pack rat popsicles???

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oh wait, I know...CHEESE of course hahahaha

[Einstein Noodle]

oh do i love this!!! you have given me imaginations of lakes, clouds and Pine trees ..i can even smell them ..well done says i!
E.
ps ..and what a great title for it!!

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Hi E...thank you for reading me and always making me smile :) The lake was called Lake of the Clouds. I saw the pines as the porcupine. Gorgeous place up by Siver City in the UP of Michigan

[Einstein Noodle]

i will have to check it out ...not too far to put in me bucket for a weekend ride :)

[Cryingkate]

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(practicing less words)

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:)............. sometimes a little says a lot

[Cryingkate]

So I Read LOL

[A hare off]

I love this. It is so abstract but beautiful. You have shown me colors without mentioning any, You have walked me out into nature, as I sat here and read and made me smile at the end of a long day and you did it in three magnificent lines. Beautiful

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Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it