Porcupine Mountain

I never saw a porcupine,

but I did see a lake, like a cloud, 

resting upon the tops of Pine trees

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Sounds like a beautiful trip to the wilderness on a long hike.

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Thank you smitty :)

[jesserose99]

well it sounds like you did see one big porcupine. what a lovely description you have here, not always easy to take nature and wrap it around something that sounds brand new, but you did a splendid job, for this description is so unique, and places such a clear image in my mind.

A gift to see beauty and harvest the words to your own beautiful picture.

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Thank you so much. Forgive my late response

[wolfshrew]

A simple place I'd like to go, after reading three small lines.

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Thank you for stopping by

[Alias]

title caught me straight away! Short, sweet, leaves you thinking and conjures some lovely imagery. Cleverly done :)

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Thank you, dear poet :)

[Marcus Sergiu David]

Just three lines painting a clear picture. Beautiful. :)

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Thanks again, dear poet, and nice meeting you

[Troy Henson]

Very clever write. Well done indeed.

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Thank you Troy :)

[Adam Adams]

Really? :/
Seemed, u never seen ones heart but oft. watch the pleasure of linen nights resting 'pon the bed of memories. Sounds interesting. *kidding*

Nevermind... nice shot as always. U have depths hidden deep in ur poetry that's enough speaking the heart. Great job! ;)

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Thank you, Adams :)

[Slow Leak]

This really made me want to read it over and over again. Haven't been to Porcupine Mountain yet, but it sounds beautiful. Hope it was a fun trip!

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It is beautiful. The U.P. is a wonderland of forests and water. Like John said, Gods country. You can check it out on youtube if you wish. Look up porcupine mountain or Pictured Rock National Shorelines ect.

[Samuel Dickens]

Slow me, I had to study this one a bit before I saw it. Clever, you are. Now I must make a trip to Beaver Lake to see it anew.

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Hi Sam :) Good to see you with my morning coffee. I'll be on my way to your page very soon :)

[andrew mitchell]

haha Who's the clever poet! great imagery!! so befitting!!

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Hi Andrew :) Thank you for the visit. Glad you liked it