The Woods

Deeper into your surreal arms, filled

with your enigmatic love, I fell

wrapped up, in silken green leaves

cuddled with your wooden fingers

kissed by only your breath, your air

The wind, you blew through my hair

and I knew, I longed to stay forever

For only you listened to my core

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

This I see floating through the air on an ink written parchment. Floating down for the recipient to find and read as he lens against a sunkissed tree. Simply lovely.

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Thank you so much, Ken. I am honored :)

[Einstein Noodle]

i could lay here forever .. love the woods ..your poem brings me right to it ... that spot with inches and inches of leaf cover ..up against and into that old tree's nook .. i am smelling the forest and now fast asleep as Mr. Winkle ever can ;) ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ :))
E.

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I love the woods too, E ((( U ))) I will leave you a thermos of coffee for when you wake up :)

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmwhat could be better?? :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is such a good allegory.....embraced by the forest of trees...they seem so welcoming to me...not dark and foreboding...lovely poem...

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It is very embracing, my friend. Thank you so much for strolling in my neck of the woods :)

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-- if the trees heard you recite this beautiful ode, lady lynn, they would embrace you and thank you... and wish with all their hearts that you spent more time with them and wrote more beautiful odes... -- loved this song of yours...

[Adam Adams]

"... wind that he blew throu' your hair?" Whao.. what a beautiful line! Is it romantic or quite erotica? lol

Never-mind, enjoyed reading it, it's kinda philosophically or I must say, "romantically" gorgeous write that speaks the heart badly. You playing with words with excellence & I may see it all through the way you getting bled along... excellent work. Keep writing!

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Thanks again, Adams. I have an intimate relationship with nature. Was my first love :)

[Adam Adams]

Oh Nature? Now I think, why I was so wondering ... why you use: "Wooden Fingers rather using Molten or Ironic" ... Damn! Lol *Chuckling*

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I was in the woods, hence the title...laughing no molten thingies in the woods, only wood lol

[Chris]

You tied nature into your existence quite well...

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Thank you for coming by, Chris

[Chris]

Anytime ...anytime at all.