The Woods

The Woods

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Deeper into your surreal arms, filled

with your enigmatic love, I fell

wrapped up, in silken green leaves

cuddled with your wooden fingers

kissed by only your breath, your air

The wind, you blew through my hair

and I knew, I longed to stay forever

For only you listened to my core

© 2015 ...


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dan
The phrase 'the woods' can conjure a foreboding feeling, where the Wolf chased Little Red Riding Hood. But your take has the woods being a comforting presence, embracing you in it's warm branches, leaves like a down pillow for the soul, the air's soft breaths sending breezing tickles through your hair. Very nicely done, young lady, and I hope you have a Happy New Year! take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Hello Dan :) Hope your holidays were full of peace love and laughter and I hope the new year is kind.. read more
wow !!!! great start and ending too was lovely !!!
i like the emotions also !!!!
kissed by only your breath, your air
The wind, you blew through my hair
these are the best lines
100 points

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thanks again Zunie :) Hope you have a lovely day
zunie frost

8 Years Ago

was my pleasure !!! have nice day you too
hey...you got a map to these woods....i could use a stroll like this :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

hahahahaha perhaps any woods will do? Thank you Terry (((you)))
I like this. It is extremely deep. I especially like the last line about "my core".

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thank you, Pete :)
lovely piece of writing, romantic thoughts synchronized with nature.
Enjoyed it.

Armin. ...

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thank you Armin :)
Entangling romantically with a tree--wow. I've never heard it put quite like this, and you're the imaginative one who did it. Tolkien's ents would approve, I'm sure. Very nice writing, Lynn.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Hi Sam :) Thank you for your visit. Warms my heart seeing you here
Ah yes... I am "home" within the misty woods of the Appalachians.
This poem calls to me.
It reads like a whispered song.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thank you, David :) appreciate your visit
When I was a bit younger I used to backpack alone into the White Mountains. Leaving the road and civilization behind me at the trailhead, after a few minutes into forest, I would get the sense of being swallowed up by another world, another dimension. The peacefulness of it all. Your poem brings me back there.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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9 Years Ago

Thank you, SF, for stopping by. I'm glad it took you back to a favorite space :)
A gorgeous write. I felt its beauty and peace. Thank you for sharing.....:)....

Posted 9 Years Ago


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9 Years Ago

Sami, I am honored. Truly! Thank you :)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome muchly. .....:)......
and the woods offer peace,quiet with sounds of birds and squirrels
wind gently blowing through the trees ,leaves dancing,a calm place to be

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9 Years Ago

Yes indeed, Ron :) Good seeing you in my neck of the woods
 wordman

9 Years Ago

haven't been on much lynn ,and i see you have posted a couple

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