When The Earth Is Gone

And I know, I will see you that day;

when the earth is gone-and away,

and our souls have survived, as

light beams, we become galaxy beetles

weightless, and enlightened like neon.

There is where my ephemeral kiss will

touch the softness of your lips, faster

than light-so you will taste your

deep, strong, love ever so missed, and

there you will follow me through

the blackened holes, we ablaze.

You are the spirit I always longed for

in your (invisibility)

Reviews

[Cryingkate]

Ok Lynn.... i gotta say.. I felt it and then wham the last line got me laughing.
i know it wasn't meant that way. Makes me chuckle more
Did I say well done?

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Laughing at you. Your bad, connie. Very bad lol Thank you for visiting my page dear friend and for the giggle

[terry smith]

Ah the great cosmic tango spreading neon plasma throughout the universe like the sparks of a lovers tryst.lovely poem Lynn:)

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Thank you so much for stopping by Terry, and for a wonderful review

[terry smith]

when I come to see you I dip my head in your waterfall to clear my mind :)

[Adam Adams]

"ephemeral"?? Whatss? Are ya for real?? Ah ... what an eye-catching & captivating word you choose to admire the moist & warmth tendencies .. lol .. of velvety-kisses. I believe, love's itself "ephemeral", to some extent that ... more the heart longs to get itself drunk with love, more love makes it quite addicted to its shades, which're being dappled on hearts thou' well fired up in the desserts of hearths. Beautiful poetry. Loved the way you put down your feelings on paper & show the world ... how two hearts & one spirit can be lived .. even if the universe's being dead. One of my fav. poetry for sure. Great work... as always!

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:) tank you so much, Adans

[Adam Adams]

You still typing on phone?? Lol

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Laughing...............

[Adam Adams]

Of curse, u shud, it's wht i wnt u 2 .. *chukling*

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My typing skills are as good as my tech skills, sir hahahaha good thing I can cook and fire a weapon or I would starve

[Adam Adams]

Oh Lord, Cook & Fire? At the same time? Damn! I must protect myself first with bullet proof jacket & helmet before I ev'n dare to meet or face you in real. Why you always scare me with your weapon .. okay, do you wanna shoot me first & the SPEAK LATER and say: Aww.. sorry honey, I just thought.. parole got escaped & entered my room." Damn! *Joking*

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Survival, sir, I was thinking survival! Laughing