Reaching To Be Music

Close...you are, within the million

different sounds your voice just "is"

Where I could hear the music of silence,

and our thoughts of equality

The attractive sound lingers, to slowly build

on each tone, note, to get

thinking, perceiving, to be the

perfect stairway of tranquil melody

Reaching to be music, to be one with me,

in harmony, intensely...close

Reviews

[dan]

lynn, equating music to the closeness of a relationship is brilliant. You manage to pack so many feelings into so few lines, very well done. I always seem to thoroughly enjoy your work. Please RR me? Thank you! take care...dan

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Hello Dan, it's good see you :) I am pleased you like this, I figured you would if you ever read it. As for RR's...but you were just hear. You could of kept on reading...laughing. Thank you so much for your warm review, my friend :)

[dan]

I went a long while without checking my rr's...my wife was in and out of the hospital and my own health suffered also due to the uncertainty and skepticism...a lot of anxious times. I'm chipping away at my stacked up rr's and will get to all of them. Nice to hear from you also. take care...dan

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I understand (((U )))