Serial, Surreal...Cereal

Trix are for kids
I prefer my fruit to have plenty of juice
Sugar Smacks
give me a fast rush and leave me hungry for more "food"
Frosted Flakes
looks good, but I'm gonna' leave that one alone
But, Oatmeal..that's wholesome, real, and sticks to my ribs!
I'm in to nutrition, you see

Reviews

[SkinlessFrank]

and it shows....wholesome and sane verse

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Thank you for your review, Frank :)

[Adam Adams]

A very pleasant & refreshing poetry you've brought to your loyal readers for sure. I've even had a very great time with such a "Vital flakes of poetry". Liked the choice of words. One of my fav. lines's given below:

"leave me hungry for more "food"... "

It's saying much outta its words. You seem to have "food" -- the food to have your body healthy & the blood running well though very linen veins of yous. Good food means good life and good life implies.. better health. So in short, to have some charm on face & the smiles right 'pon furrowed lips, "Serial.. Surreal.. Cereal" is must to have especially in breakfast. What a beautiful poetry it is. It sounds like a t.v ad "Serial Surreal .. Cereal. To make your kids healthy and have your body in shape, always use.. Serial ..Surreal.. Cereal -- the zone of happiness & a way of happiest family. Ting. Tong. Lol Very evocative you're. Wonderful job, as always for sure.

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I'm glad you liked it, Adams. Thank you for such a wonderful review

[terry smith]

ha ha maypo! :)

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Laughing...thank you Terry :)

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~~ love the title and the sage advice...

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Thank you Serah!!

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~~ you're very welcome, lady lynn... :)

[Lydia Shutter]

What a cute write. Love the play on words in the title. Give me Shredded Wheat any day! :) Lydi**

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Thank you, Lydi

[Cherry Pepperweb]

A sugar rush comes quick, leaves just as fast.
False sense of gratification.
There's something to be said for oatmeal.
It's safe.

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Indeed it is cherry :)

[wordman]

oat meal,blah frosted flakes not bad with whole milk and bacon
are you in a silly mood today

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I guess I am , Ron lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i wonder if there are Surreal killers?

fun write, lynn.

j.

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Laughing...wouldn't eat on of them for breakfast either, Jacob

[Samuel Dickens]

My dad's two favorite foods in the whole world were baked sweet potatoes and oats. (Not eaten at the same time.) He lived to be ninety-one. When I was a kid, I remember how sugary cereals were always sponsors for the kiddy shows. Boy, did they work, too. Soon afterwards, I'd have me a big bowl of sugar frosted something or other.

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Hi Sam, Thanks for stopping by :)))

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the empty-caloried snacks that have many kids addicted to those sugar highs... this is such an entertaining write that tells us a lot about its author...i'll be sure to keep oatmeal and fruit with real juice on hand in case you visit :)

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Laughing...it's actually the kind of man I prefer for breakfast FT Good to know your real food to your guests though hahaha

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haha...totally missed the boat in this one, Lynn... maybe it's the smell of dinner cooking that has my olfactory senses on overload and all I could see was food...real food...but, your 'food' should have tipped me as well as the comment about nutrition... now I have to reread with a man in mind (in my case, a woman) because I prefer the real deal, too, not all the sugar coated ones running around lol :)

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It's cool I expect a lot of people to not really get this one