Reining Thoughts

Thoughts are clouds in the open sky
of pure awareness.
We are sky-borne condensation, baby...
in the royal-awe eye of the storm, beats my heart
There's a stillness in creation...busy as it seems.

Reviews

[-Scribe in Style-]

How do you do this!!!
It's so perfectly phrased!
"stillness in creation"!!!
And your reference to the different stages of water cycle is just brilliantly combined with the ideas.
Great work!
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I am in awe

[wordman]

and the stillness of creation is god looking around ,watching as your spirit becomes one with the universe where we all were born,first in spirit then into flesh where were supposed to reside until we
return to the clouds of spirituality a lot said in a few choice words

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Thank you Ron :)

[wordman]

and you are welcome lynn

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and what we create leads both a still life and one of fast movement...the words remain frozen on the page, but the readers come by in droves, with eyes and mind moving over them.

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Thank you so much for your visits into my "world" Jacob :))

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this is such a gorgeous write... 'thoughts are clouds', 'We are sky-borne condensation', connected yet individual...we are a part of creation and creation is a part of us... love it, Lynn!

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It loves you too, FT :) Thank you so much !

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It should, I am a part of it, somewhere :D ... you are welcome, my friend!

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hahaha Yes, sir are!!

[Adam Adams]

It's a very fascinating... an eye-catching piece you've come up with. It reflects how one (a writer) should always keep his head in clouds. Ye - the thoughts're just alike clouds & their frequency's way similar to winds,.. has no direction,... no path,... no destination & no separate route/lane to blow/drift along. Thoughts enter the head when they have to & they certainly leave the room-empty when they "need" to. So, I guess, it's a very good-stuff to understand what preciously the conception/implications of "thoughts" are... 'bout... cause, the funny thing's, neither they leave you lone nor make you feel full of content & this's all what makes hearts "Reining Thoughts". What an imagery it is! Brilliant. Loved the write!

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Adams, this is an abstract painting of thought (so to speak) It's all about creation as one being into individual beings and still being one. Effects if you will. lol I have no idea where my mind goes sometimes. Random. Thank you for trying to figure it out, my friend haha

[Adam Adams]

Intriguing reply, as expected. Lol
Sometimes, it's very good not to get stuck in the same piece of art. It's must to dwell to... may be, to nowhere but to the piece of artistry. You paint romance 'pon words; love 'pon hearts; sometimes, the lyrics across compositions (poetry), you, of course, shape erotica (18+/explicit) writes well with words (with appreciations) & now... I do figure out that how beautifully you "Effect" your readers... bringing 'em something new & unique to be read. Good one. I like your ideas & the analogies ov'r subjects. Kinda innovative & creative as well ;)