Reining Thoughts

Thoughts are clouds in the open sky
of pure awareness.
We are sky-borne condensation, baby...
in the royal-awe eye of the storm, beats my heart
There's a stillness in creation...busy as it seems.

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

Wow. Primordial. One with the cosmos, exuding attitude. This one knocks the ball out of the park. Fantastic, creative, genius, Lynn.

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Hi Sam :) If you approve, then I am content I have done something right :) Honored by your enthusiasm...deeply

[David Scott]

I'm a sucker for a woman calling her man, "baby".
The poem is an embrace.
Lovely.

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[David Scott]

You need to read my poem, "Thouhts of a Cloud". 2nd or 3rd page. Similar thoughts.

[SkinlessFrank]

A visual tool that we sometimes use when outlining a problem in probability theory is to draw the universe as a rectangle, and an event space as a circle within this rectangle. Other circles might also appear. These are sometimes referred to Venn diagrams. That act of placing the circle of thought into nothingness creates something, doesn't it? It IS the condensation of our mark upon the universe, our imprint. Even more so with a unique and creative thought, which does indeed quicken the pulse and lets us mingle if only for a microsecond in the fires of creation.

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:).......I like the way you think. Thank you for such an intriguing review, SF

[Ken Simm.]

I always thought I could never enjoy a poem or think it beautiful that had baby in it. Seems I couldn't have been more wrong.

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laughing...I'm glad I was able to change your mind, Ken

[SquinklaPsyOps]

A powerful write, expressed so uniquely.

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Thank you, my dear :)

[gabrielle]

Short yet meaningful. How great it is that amid chaos, we can still find beauty and stillness.

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We are beauty and stillness, if we choose to be :) Thank you, dear poet

[Einstein Noodle]

you have hit on some great and meditative truths in this ..pureness of thought ..love that ..and stillness in the storms ..fantastic seed in Faith .. such a wonderful well packed read for me!
E.
ps. nice bit of word play in the title ..i have read in the Bible that if one can control one's tongue (or words) then we control the whole body ... interesting how so many faiths put an importance and power in the spoken word ... love it!

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Hi E :) love your visits, my friend

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ..................

[Woody]

wonderfully phrased Lynn. love it.
I never thought of myself as a drop of condensation floating in the air. but I like that :)

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Thanks woody :)

[Cryingkate]

Sounds Like Magic .... A Beautiful Love Potion

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hahaha could be...everything's a possibility, my dear

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-- "in the royal-awe eye of the storm"... wow, my lady... and the entire poem is a beautifully deep thought...

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Thank you Serah :) This one has a special spot in my heart

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-- i could tell, my lady... and you're very welcome... :)