The Sickening

Watching your belly fill with stench
their crime is on display
and still their eyes are immune
to the truth

Reviews

[David Scott]

The bloating of indulgence goes beyond a physical misfortune. The true tragedy is the ignorance of cause and effect on the spiritual character birthed from misguided intentions...
Our modern world is ripe with "sickening".
Yet, we can vomit the pollution from our souls even if we do cognitively recognize the danger. Nature has a way, and if she doesn't kill us, she will heal us.

[Ken Simm.]

This is remarkable. Its almost the antithesis of love poetry.

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hi Ken :) Thanks for stopping by, dear poet

[Adam Adams]

Ouch,That's cold. I like your anticipation of love-edges!

I guess, your're quite right, ye-the world's being materialistic that's costing "hearts" very much even the love. Unfaithful faiths, heinously shattered unbound promises & addiction to wickedness... everything's certainly involved into "sickening". Girls & their curves, ah chronically enough to loose faith on humanity. Very deep insights you've boiled with swords. Liked your take on.. on this write! Kinda fascinating to read. Nice imagery!

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Thank your for your gracious review, Adams. I will be by to see you soon, dear poet :)))

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oh, this does sound sickening... sounds like the world is dying around us and those responsible are too blinded by greed and power to do anything about it... a harsh reality but well-written

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Yes indeed, FT. Thank you for your insightful visit :)

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Welcome, Lynn :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sounds like our politicians....

nicely said...could have lots of meanings...but i see us filled up with promises and lies, and things never getting any better----broken promises have a really noxious scent.

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I like your take on this, Jacob :))) Thank you for gracing my page, sir

[wordman]

this sounds like a good taste of hate,contempt or self righteousness