For you, my mind acts out its disobedience in sensuous frenzies you rush me into raging rivers, though I can't see your hands you kiss me drunken with lips of primal aphrodisiac,though I can't feel them ravaging and my heart skips and leaps into ecstatic arrhythmia as giddy as a child following the mind
In this world of you, it rains pearls and I am a leaf, as light as your air, floating in your wind in this place, my love exists in drops of tears, liquid symbols of joy, releasing fears.
I climb high to dive deep in the infinite ocean of your soul and I beg for drowning in your heart's beating
In this place, your messages are electric currents running through me and I am a love awakened simply by your name
Sadistically, supersonic waves bashed 'pon my vibrant heart having your alcoholic words across its unfazed beats! Beautiful. The title "For You" is itself an enormous thing to be "read" & understood deeply, it displays, how one can get relinquished whole to someone, in love. However, the way you've written 'tis piece so immensely along with some consensual so sensuous words's the foremost thing to be appreciated as well that further makes me having this write saved in library & I'd like to keep it save for long. This piece's for desperation that's being stirred with emotions nicely. Excellent work!
Adams, thank you so much for such a wonderful review :)))
9 Years Ago
An honor to me to visit your poetry. There's always some kinda depth - a real nice realism of depths.. read moreAn honor to me to visit your poetry. There's always some kinda depth - a real nice realism of depths's always being found in your systematic words which further touch an every vibe of my vibrant heart, deeply. One thing's pretty clear for sure that you've a talent - a very artistic talent that you better know how to shape alongwith articulation. Very impressive. Have at it!
verses that make me tremble in the joy and magic of the images. ohh.. only the heart knows all these truths about "you".. loved that last stanza.. it zapped me back to a sweet sunshine! :D
oh my!! such abandon .. its what men want the power to do .... maybe not all "men" ..but this one for sure ;)
very sensuous and inspiring ;) power packed .. one to read along with a lover
E.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Luv ya, E. your visits make me smile..thank you, my friend
Your sense of creativity is enveloped with deep sincerity to your emotions, I am awed by the line 'I am a love, awakened simply by your name' . I am glad that I randomly browsed the writings and came across this one, so beautifully penned.