For You

For you,
my mind acts out its disobedience
in sensuous frenzies
you rush me into raging rivers,
though I can't see your hands
you kiss me drunken
with lips of primal aphrodisiac,though I can't feel them ravaging
and my heart skips
and leaps into ecstatic arrhythmia
as giddy as a child following the mind

In this world of you,
it rains pearls and
I am a leaf,
as light as your air,
floating in your wind
in this place,
my love exists in drops of tears,
liquid symbols of joy,
releasing fears.

I climb high
to dive deep
in the infinite ocean of your soul
and I beg for drowning in your heart's beating

In this place,
your messages are electric
currents running through me
and I am a love
awakened simply by your name

Reviews

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I CLIMB HIGH TO DIVE DEEP
IN THE INFINITE OCEAN OF YOUR SOUL
AND I BEG FOR DROWNING IN YOUR HEARTS BEATING
Nice one ,i do find this poem very good.

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Thank you so much, dear poet :)

[andrew mitchell]

A true understanding of love lynn

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Hi Andrew, thanks for coming by :)

[andrew mitchell]

a pleasure lynn

[A hare off]

Gorgeous and timeless is the love you express in your beautiful poem. This ink seems to flow from a place quite deep in your heart. I can feel this poem as much as read it. Simply gorgeous.

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Thank you so much for stopping by :)

[Woody]

bloody hell! this is terrific Lynn. mesmerizing write. it's people like you who put me off poetry. don't get me wrong, it's gorgeous but I should stop masquerading as poet.

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:) Hi Woody! Good to see you on my page. Don't you dare even think about not writing. Your style is different...it's fun and clever, and certainly awesome. You make people smile woody and I love that!

[Relic]

This was really nice to read. I can see you breathe in deep your thoughts before writing. Your sensual and your loving side show through in this.

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:) thank you, Relic

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing poetry dear Lynn.
"In this place,
your messages are electric
currents running through me
and I am a love
awakened simply by your name"
Best days of a life. When the thought of someone make the heart dance. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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Thank you so much, John. Always good to see you in my space :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[David Scott]

Then ending stanza is mature understanding. This foundation forms roots for the swaying, dancing emotions of the poem's body.
This is how being open to others transforms ordinary humans into LOVE...
Beautifully done.

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Thank you, David. Appreciate your kind review

[terry smith]

That is some kind of wonderful love!!!!!! :)

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yes, my friend, it was :) Thank you for coming by

[Ken Simm.]

The whole has a golden quality to it but that second stanza, well! Will lost for words suffice?

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Definitely, coming from you, Ken :))) thank you!

[MOON]

Lovely write , love in all its splendour,

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so good to see you, Moon, thank you :))))