"Inheritance"

Breathe...
the dream that sleeps
within
uni-verse, the song
behold
holographic will

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

I love the starting of the poetry very much. Readers easily get impacted by such an art where the smoothness of variable dreams come forward in words... to change the world. Nice imagery. It's seemed to be one of my favorites!

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Thank you for such a wonderful review, Adams. I am honored :)

[Adam Adams]

Pleasure's mine ;)

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We all share in that Uni- verse singing together with voices that illuminate our lives. It is written in the stars of our lives that we keep fueling with our open sentiments.
A great poem dear Lynn!!

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Thank you midnight rainbow :)))

[ANTO]

The opening gambit - brings such calm and sets the pace and scene - great skill Lynn. An excellent multi-layered piece. Has a real feel of encapsulating the beginning/past and the future of us all.
I like this very much.
thanks for sharing.

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((((Anto ))) thank you :)

[ANTO]

awww thanks my friend (hugs) back .

[wordman]

breathe the dream that sleeps,a creative write lynn

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Thank you, Ron :)

[wordman]

you`re welcome mynn

[Einstein Noodle]

magnificent .. so cool .. inspires me to thought and will .. deep, penetrating universal all .. intellectually stimulating word play and up to date closing line .. i love this poem .. into the library it goes .. you just keep on writing little lynn ;)
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[jacob erin-cilberto]

and the dream will will out with a strong enough song.

beautiful piece in such short phrasing....but you know i like brevity...less is more.


great ending too...and i wonder sometimes where poets inherit the words...don't know if i am really part of my family....no poets or writers at all....everyone more or less leaning toward the black and white of things.

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Yes, sir, I know you do :) Thank you, Jacob!

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P.s. no poets in my family either

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such a clever, poem, Lynn... the song of the universe and our dreams, that is what we will to those who come behind us for that is what we had when we entered this world and that is all we really leave that lives on forever... love the title, too :)

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:) thank you so much, FT