Symbiosis

Says Love...
I will not be moved
by primitive hands
and cold feet.
I am the core.
The eye in the center
of this hurricane.
I am not an instrument,
I am the symphony.
I am not hope,
You are.
I am infinite,
YOU are possibility.
I am that, I am...
Always...all-ways...Love

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, love is infinite and truly is at the core of everything that moves us...everything that brings us happiness. How beautiful your words are, Lynn!! Lydi**

[An owl on the moon]

Reading your words and pausing... wishing that the highest form of our learning flowed through Love... was focused on Love... What kind of world might we create if the Love you speak of was embraced by all? It would be a new symphony... every dawn.

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Craig, always a blessing to have you by :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Love is what we need to receive and give.
"YOU are possibility.
I am that, I am...
Always...all-ways...Love"
Love is hard to define. my grand parent showed me what love is. 65 years together in good and bad day. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Dear Lynn. I have enjoyed your words and thoughts.
Coyote

[FJ Davis]

"I am that, I am.." A declaration of Godhood. God is love; all love comes from God.
Also, of course, it could be a much more earthly assertion of mere Popeyehood.
Outstanding poem, Lynn!

[JayceeC]

This whole write is packed with great juxtapositions that are at heart little gems of wisdom. I (love) is infinite..YOU are possibilities..this one sticks because everyone is a possibility for love by someone in some way. great write..Love the last lines too. Would not change a thin with this.

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Jaycee, thank you so much for coming by

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what a great last line to wrap up a great play on words...and the sentiment...love is the core...it is not just the instrument, it is the symphony...

excellent...

j.

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Jacob, if you approve, I must of done something right :) Thank you, dear poet

[dan]

lynn, I've told you this before, but I like your style. You have a deft way of crafting words into phrases and then piecing the phrases together to equal a poem. I don't usually like to quote writes in my reviews, but some spectacular wordplay here: "I am not an instrument, I am the symphony." Bravo! take care...dan

[Matching Socks]

Always, all ways...
Lynn, this poem describes so beautifully something so difficult to describe.

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You know love so very well, Lynn... 'a symphony and not an instrument' and in 'all ways' - such beautiful descriptors... and the open lines say it all... you can't win a heart by being all hands and running at the first hint of love... well-done, my friend...

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FT...you read me so well and your heart is huge (((U ))) Never an unkind word to anyone. It's an honor to ha you by :)

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I am just observant and good at listening, Lynn... and I try to keep my world (and the people in it) positive as much as I can... there is good in most everything if we dig deep enough (though there are the occasional bad seed that refuses to be anything but)... I am always trying to be a better human :)

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You are succeeding :)

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...thanks... but how could I not with wonderful people like you around? :)

[ANTO]

You did it here lynn - you caught the wind.
Bravo wonderful poet

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(((( U )))) hopefully I don't get stuck in a tree hahaha

[ANTO]

lol - God forbid - all those firemen have to rescue you