Symbiosis

Says Love...
I will not be moved
by primitive hands
and cold feet.
I am the core.
The eye in the center
of this hurricane.
I am not an instrument,
I am the symphony.
I am not hope,
You are.
I am infinite,
YOU are possibility.
I am that, I am...
Always...all-ways...Love

Reviews

[Bacchus]

I am the symphony.
To have a part in it- is an honor.
Of this infinite Love from the I AM.

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Thank you so much for stopping by, my dear

[MOON]

Symbiosis says it all . Lovely Lynn as usual.love the core , the symphony indeed!

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Moon...what's truly lovely, is to see you by! Good of you to brighten my screen :)

[James]

I really like the idea of love being the whole symphony. It takes every instrument to make it work. We have to love the whole person not just individual parts, or it will never last.

Thanks,

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Thank you, James :)

[softlyfall]

This just left me speechless. Every line is authentic and profound. Like a tiny prayer. Oh my gosh, I love this sooo much!
I think the whole world should read this.

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I am happy you liked this one, softly, and humbled by your review. Thank you!

[SkinlessFrank]

You bring out such hope and brightness with this one. The eye in the centre is the sun, and we are drawn to it by the gravity of your words.

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SF, That is so sweet of you to say...thank you...

[David Scott]

This is sound reasoning and artfully crafted lines.
Too often we assign the love label to "instruments" and we call one instrument love and another unlovely...
Who would enjoy cymbals clanging over and over, yet in the symphony they are lovely...
I digress. You poetry was perfect. Simply worded, concise, visual, auditory, philosophical, condensable and expandable all at once.

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Thank you so much, dear poet :)

[Adam Adams]

Loved the starting of your poetry with such given lines:

"Says Love...
I will not be moved..."

I'd say, Very thoughtful & evocatively furnished poetry it is. Many lines're one of my fav. like:

"I'm not hope, but you are... "

So touching verses you've come up with. Seemed, you've curved your life with literacy (passion of words). Ye -- it's true enough that.. the love ain't want.. even it never wishes to get unplugged off the realism of its spirit (that does resides in someone's heart) so I guess, it's very productive line:

"I'm not an instrument, but symphony.."

Ye --- in love, one's instrument so the other's its symphony. Even the symphony can't be reverberated across walls without having the existence of instrument around lovearcs so how can one spirit without heart or the beat without heart? No chance. What a great tapestry of love you've painted on words! Excellent work!

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Thank you so much, Adams, for such a generous review :)

[hanir]

Symbiosis. An essential element for love to work.

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thank you :

[africa]

Sublime beautiful words here. Very inspirational indeed.

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Thank you Africa :)

[rubie]

beautifully done!

yes, love IS the core, the center, the eye around which everything else swirls.

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What a sweet review :) thank you so much for your visits. Looking forward to reading more of you, but for now duty calls