Strange

Strange

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Mostly, when people say they care, they really don't
and thoughtlessness is an epidemic
and love, a fantasy or a duty or a pride of ownership
but sometimes they really love what you do for them
grateful as long as you keep doing
feelings are fickle
they come and go like the faces that carry them
even the sky is fake these days
I watch them spray the sun away
plant artificial food
create tragedy for a time that could have been peaceful
should have been...peaceful
so what's "real" ?
shrugs...matter of opinion
If bullshit's real for you...then that's what's REAL,
I guess 

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Certainly makes us look at what's happening in our own circles, for sure. Lots of truth to this piece, Lynn: some people are only out for their own gains, nothing more, and they do not hesitate to use people to ensure their 'needs' are met. Unfortunately, their actions often go on to cause great pain in strife in those affected, long after the deeds have been carried out. Love the last lines... FT

Posted 9 Years Ago


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~~ ah... well... people do nasty things because they don't know any better... ~~ at the end of the day, all that is in our control is our own behaviour... (unless we're ill or victims of substance abuse)... and maybe there are a few people around us who we can influence... to some extent... depending on how receptive they are... ~~ life becomes a pleasant experience only when we consider our own lives as an opportunity to get at least some basic stuff right...

Posted 9 Years Ago


I find this a funny one and yet an interesting way to look at things.
no denying bullshit's real :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


It is always true that evil people do evil things. Most especially, that spiritual wickedness in high places the Bible warns us about.
Those in your everyday circle, however, are mostly genuine--though often given to thoughtlessness--and basically fair-minded.
Remember, however, what I have repeatedly maintained: All love is self-love.
Explains a lot.
Thought-provoking piece, Lynn!

Posted 9 Years Ago


"sometimes they really love what u do for them
grateful as long as you keep doing " - calls to min the old adage 'eaten bread is soon forgotten', lynn.

The skies are faked and the food is too - the people are fake and so is the poo
bullshit is real if your the bull who s***s it and if youre the shoveller who picks it up, I guess.

You make me think real s**t all the time lynn



Posted 9 Years Ago


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9 Years Ago

laughing...no s**t :)
ANTO

9 Years Ago

yeah - sure as s**t you do ! xD

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