Prologue

This is the story's intro

The tale of a King

 

Prologue

The year was 679 O.P. In the known region of Daladash there was home to three kingdoms. The kingdom of the north the Darik’s, the kingdom of the East the Trosh’s, and lastly the kingdom of the west the Hone’s.  These three kingdoms have always been at war, a never ending war and a costly war.

During the year 676 the Hone king went off on a journey to travel to each of the other kingdoms and offer peace to them. During his journey he managed to get all of the kings together and work out a way of peace to end the war. They all agreed to peace and traveled back to their homelands. Of course the whole land of Daladash was in rejoicing and celebrating went on for days.

After many years away the Hone king finally was coming home and the entire kingdom was preparing for his return.

But as fate would have it the peace would not last, as the King returned home another king sat idly by. This King in fact was thinking, formulating a plan of attack. He knew that by agreeing to this peace it would be the most surprising of attacks and they wouldn’t even know they were coming, War is coming he thought to him-self.

And as all of this was going on there was a single boy. A single poor peasant boy, he was quiet the thinker though one of the smartest in the land, but still he was never noticed. Its funny how this one poor peasant boy would end up holding the fate of the three kingdoms on his very own shoulders.

This my friend is no child’s story, no made up story to tell to past the time.

This is the Tale of a king

Reviews

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Hm, intriguing ideas... I'm not sure how you take criticism, but I'm also a writer with no experience, so I take what I get LOL

I think its a bit too... informative. As a prologue, it should be more of a eye- catching, can't stop reading kind of opening. Don't get me wrong, it was good!! The first paragraph was good, but a bit boring to be honest when you describe the kingdoms. I think maybe it could be added later? You worded everything else quite well. :D I don't mean any offense. I hope this helps you become better than the great writer you already are :)

I don't know, I write poetry not books, but this was very good, especially since your not experienced!!! Maika'i no!! I give you props, fellow writer :)