EDGE

EDGE

A Poem by traveling mind

On the edge with you

Am I leaving you

Or loving you

 

What about you

Out on the edge

Hanging on by a single thread

 

Spining my head, turing it inside out

There's blood pouring out, where our hearts used to be

Out on the edge with you

© 2011 traveling mind


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Very powerful and good. Did notice that there is a MINOR spelling error with pouring, but that is trivial. I really like it. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

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forty ish, an austistic child, fighter of life through n through if i can get up feel the sun, the beauty in my garden my sons sticky smile, lifes crap can wait more..

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