ANGEL WITH A VIEW

ANGEL WITH A VIEW

 

There she sat, cold air swirling around

When i looked at her face, i can see the anguish

Eyes filled with water, as she blinked it rolled

rolling down her cheek, over and over again

Her chest heaved heavily, she was in deep pain over something

As i watched, she sat so still consumed by her emotions,

Not even noticing i was ever there.

I never knew silence to be this deafening.....

After watching for what seemed like an hour,

I felt compelled to heal, to comfort, but i couldn't reach her

As she watchdd the waves roll and roar, and the sea gulls cry

She finally joined the crying birds, the intensity that came from deep within

I found it moving as i stood there watching,

I felt compelled once more to help

But i couldnt reach her, So enveloped with her pain

She was unreachable, and all i could do is watch

After some time, i finally walked away

Leaving the silence that was so deafening behind

Leaving her note was all i could do

Your angel is watching out for you.

Reviews

[Thea]

Such a good poem...Keep up the good work... ^^

[Becky C Strukamp]

Thanks for your review of my poem.

While reading your poem, Angel with a View, I found myself tearing up. It touched my heart and soul. thanks for sharing such tender parts of your emotions and feelings.

[Renay]

Good. It is very deep, I couldn't help but wonder if the Angel was actually the person sitting there crying, hurting, in pain. Made me think and I like that.

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Amazing write here. Enjoyed this

[Coffee Vampier]

I love this! I love the idea we have angels watching over us... we really do need them. beautiful imagery, I cant wait to read more from you :)