Heart and Human

"Put me back together!" said the shattered heart
"I dare not" said its human
"You really want a broken heart?"
"No but I do not wish to waste my time, you'll only be broken again,

maybe if i leave you, you'll be so broken you'll mend."
"You do not make much sense, dear human. I dare not ask you once more

so i guess i shall lie here shattered and  ignored."
"my thinking is this and only this,

if you remain broken you are easier to miss,

a fatal blow could pass through the air

where you would've been floating if you were repaired."

Reviews

[The Elder Pine]

I think this piece is deep and well writen not just cute. Well done, I hopet to read more for you later on down the road.

[LethalDoseOfReality]

Yes,very cute.I think this is adorable.So many people think like your poem.Good job.:)

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

I like it... great way of showing emotions dealing with a broken heart...

[Queen of the Damned]

A cute way to display the anguish of a broken heart.