Apparitions, Harlequins and Sands

Apparitions, Harlequins and Sands

A Poem by transentience

If I could see into your future...
would you dream of friendships past?
Could you embrace my ghostly presence?
if I asked you to take my hand...

© 2016 transentience


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first two sentences dont make any sense??????????????
like your seeing into my "future" and then seeing the past like wtf man
try being more discreet an s**t ya know set the atmosphere

just trying to be honest SCRIP SCRIP SCRIP but this is pretty s**t
try again!
repetition is key
for me reptilian is key
haha get it
ok
Scrip scrip scribbles

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on January 16, 2016
Last Updated on January 20, 2016
Tags: short poem, poetry, ghosts, love, friendship, time, dreams, future

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transentience
transentience

Buena Park, CA



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29. Writer, dreamer, musician, thinker, disabstractionist An empath who fights for what they believe in My mind is a blessing and a curse, but music keeps me balanced I tend to psychoanalyze .. more..

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