HIS TRUE SIN

HE TOOK WHAT WASN'T HIS AND NEVER PAID THE PRICE

A bird with cut wings.

Innocent blood splayed,

An innocence taken.

 

Stripped of pride and dignity,

To be taken by the owner of it.

 

Taken with no shame,

A family left behind.

Living behind curtains,

Curtains of righteousness

And piety.

 

Not piety,

FAKE PIETY.

 

A plastered smile,

Sinister yet deceiving,

A Devil's companion

In clean white clothes.

 

Yet you stand before your lord

To ask, ask for what?

When all you do and did

Was to take,

Take an innocence,

An innocence meant for another.

Yet you deny,

Deny the blood on your hands,

An impure soul you are.

I’m not to judge,

I’m just a lawyer to

Argue a pile of sins,

Sins of the devils.

Author's Note

THANKS FOR READING, PLEASE TRY YOUR VERY BEST TO REVIEW.

Reviews

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

such an emotional, powerful read here

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'A plastered smile, sinister yet deceiving'... Such pain , helplessness and anger coming out from these lines and from the whole poem. When sin empowers itself and judgement cries for true hope then this pain comes out as poetry... To rip the devils heart out. Much emotion portrayed here...

Well penned

[tranquilspace]

Thank you very much for the lovely review and thank you for reading.

[Chris Shaw]

A powerful write which leaves the reader feeling the emotional damage inflicted here. Real pain. There are many takers out there.

Chris

[tranquilspace]

The takers don't care unfortunately, thank you for reading and the nice review

[Chris Shaw]

You are right. The takers don't care and the givers of this world suffer. Look after yourself.

[tranquilspace]

YES, THANK YOU VERY MUCH, I WILL

[Serendipity Planet]

Emotional and powerful words to describe a huge amount of pain and unjustice
Animals take with no permission, there is no forgivness here

[tranquilspace]

THANKS FOR REVIEWING AND READING. DIFFERENT PEOPLE CAUSE DIFFERENT KINDS OF PAIN.

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Im wondering if this is about rape or murder, such a strong awesome poem against these grave evil sins. You express awesomely. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too

[tranquilspace]

THANK YOU VERY MUCH, IT'S ABOUT RAPE. THANKS FOR REVIEWING AND I'LL CHECK IT OUT

[Shelley Warner]

Sad and true. Some sins have been committed in the name of religion. A very thoughtful poem.

[tranquilspace]

Thank you so much for reviewing and reading

[Shelley Warner]

You're welcome

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

The meaning of these words hold such strength and power to the voice that speaks them. A truth that is painful and undeniable. One that can no longer be contained. For truth exists in the light not the shadows where lies seek to hide. Thank you for your words and most importantly the truth from which they are spoken from.

[tranquilspace]

Thank you for reading and the review, also for sharing such comforting words.