PHANTOM

They say the soul is the entity,

The being of the body.

Actions don’t hurt the mind

Nor the heart or the brain,

It breaks the soul crushes it

Beyond recognition till it

No longer recognizes the

Body as the vessel it

Once possessed.

Until the soul is broken

People never understand

Understand that

The damage is done.

The damage done

Sometimes can’t be fixed

Because no handy Manny

Or Bob the builder

Can put in pins and nails

Then hit it back

To the way it should

Or used to be.

Because we truly

Don’t have spare parts.

 

 

 

Author's Note

I don't have a title but please while viewing this piece it'll be nice to suggest a title, thank you for reading

Reviews

[light and ashes]

"Because we truly don't have spare parts." great line. Your words are true.

[tranquilspace]

THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR READING AND GIVING AN HONEST REVIEW

[light and ashes]

You're welcome :)

[light and ashes]

could still use some work, but it has potential to be great.

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Thank you very much

[light and ashes]

:) you're welcome

[Seriana]

I specifically picked this piece because it didn't have a title. It was unknown. Almost like a Phantom. That would be my title suggestion. :)

I especially enjoyed this line, "till it
No longer recognizes the
Body as the vessel it
Once possessed."

Nicely done!

[tranquilspace]

THAT SOUNDS LIKE A VERY WONDERFUL TITLE. THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR THOUGHTS, THE REVIEW AND THE VERY BEAUTIFUL TITLE.