Surpassing Amends
A Poem by Riley Justine
Only one of us deserves it 
THEY SAY PIECES OF A BROKEN HEART will fit TOGETHER
BUT I GUESS OURS ARE BEYOND REPAIR because we don't fit together anymore.
© 2016 Riley Justine
Author's Note
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These broken hearts can't heal.
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Reviews
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When heart is done with someone. Can't be repaired. I liked the logical ending to the poem. Thank you Riley for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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This is indeed the tragedy. hearts when broken can never fit. Although one may strive and appear to do so. Great read! Keep up the good work :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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8 Years Ago
Thanks for reviewing!
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8 Years Ago
You are welcome! The pleasure was mine ☺
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Added on October 26, 2016
Last Updated on November 13, 2016
Tags: broken, love, hearts
Author
Riley JustineAlberta, Canada
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Basically just a normal girl pretending she's good at writing. Constructive criticism and reviews are appreciated!
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