Who I was to you

Who I was to you

A Poem by Kris Tate

I want you know

I am no longer in the flow

 

Now I am different

No longer your heaven sent

 

You hurt me

Set me free

 

You think I am

Still your jelly and jam

 

I have found a new love

He is sent from above

 

All I want and need

So I can succeed

 

So you want me...

Well you can just remember me

© 2008 Kris Tate


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I liked this. I liked the flow! The rhymes were good. I liked the line about jam and jelly! Great work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely said.... Thanks for entering it in the Sleepless Night Contest...

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on April 9, 2008
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Kris Tate
Kris Tate

Humble, TX



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