Waffle House

Yellow and black squares
Up high
Sizzle and scrape
In the middle
Flop and tread
Down low

Order
Hashbrowns
Scattered, smothered, peppered capped
Bacon
In like two out like one

Here is your coffee ma’am
 

Reviews

[East of Eden]

Ah this poem brings back memories of the waffle house i went to on holiday in America. yum yum! cheers!

[Tamme]

This caters to all the senses making it completely delicious.

"In like two out like one" --- I like that line

[James K. Blaylock]

Man, this piece has got my belly talkin'! Loved it.

jkb

I think you described a waffle house perfectly! Great description!

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Short, crisp, to the point ... kind of a zinger, again I like it.

It sounds like a great morning while you are eating at your fav. place

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it makes me kinda hungry. I love the waffle house so i like this poem. Its short and sweet but descriptive.

[Lisa J "The Rose&q..]

This is adorable. I have eaten there!! I loved this!!

[Emily B]

I can smell the smells and hear the clatter of dishes. Great write!