End of Times

A little bit mad and a little bit crazy, but it is a call to arms to help keep the world in good care for our children and their children.

Ashes fall from a clear sky

Water floods that which was dry land

The world seems to tremeble and die

The people left try to lend a hand

But they are too late

Those who came before

Gave them this fate

The Earth's face has been tore

Gaping mouths open

Where once it was firm

Animals left in the pen

Yet those before had no concern

With the terror and the pain

Left to those who are left

Oh please fix this dark rain

Before it leaves all bereft.

Reviews

This is a very strong, powerful poem! I loved the message! Very good poem!

[Emily B]

This is a strong write. Thanks so much for sharing it.

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

This is definitely not crazy.
This is a very beautiful piece.
A very lovely poem.
Excellent flow of words.
Great rythme.
Awesome ryhming.
I really enjoyed this piece of work.
Wonderfully written.
Brilliant Job!
^_^

[Sally Edwards]

Not crazy at all, I like to think I do my bit to help the world be better for my future grandchildren etc. I like this poem , very good descriptive lines and so true. Great sentiments