At the Bottom of the Ocean

At the bottom of the ocean,
Where the darkest souls lie,
Lay a thousand broken hearts,
That only longed to fly.

At the bottom of the sea,
Where the injured minds lie,
Lay a million corrupted souls,
Who once wanted to die.

Never mind I take it back,
They did not once want to die,
They wished they were gone a hundred times,
And every time they cried.

At the bottom of the ocean,
Some of us wish we lay,
But the price of our own suicide,
Is too much for us to repay.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think? i hope it was worth while :)

Reviews

[Misery]

Well-written, Zapata. Short, crisp and thought-provoking. It is worth while. Thank you for sharing.
I hope you will share more and allow us to stroll through the landscapes of your words.

[Zapata]

thank you so much! I greatly appreciate your input, and I will definitely continue to write