Crying At Night

Uncertainity in love can be crucial....

You don't know how I cry so hard at night

Tears run down so warm and fast

Thinking to myself "How long are we going to last?

Everyday it's like a whirlwind of emotions

And I don't know what to expect

My mind Is running in so many directions

My heart keep beating to the sounds of our madness

Is it really love between us

One day I think it is, the other days I think we have lost the passion

Our relationship is in and out of sight

Maybe that is why I keep crying at night.

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like it..its a wonderful poem..i think so many of us thinks this way.
Great Job

[Anna]

This is innocent and simple.

The only part that didn't flow for me was
"One day I think it is, the other days I think we have lost the passion"
It just didn't fit right...

Otherwise, great job!