Intoxicated

6 word story contest entry

I drink desire

You, my cup

Reviews

[Tina Bee]

Short and sweet.

[Angel's Lady]

Nicely done! Good job, in so few words.

[Dani California]

Awesome! :)
This is the shortest review I've ever given,
but then....
that may very well be the shortest story I've ever read..lol!

very clever my friend!

[Winter McPherson]

Wow...wasn't expecting something so short. But its beautifully simple and sensual. I like it! Bravo! The length of it makes it very easy to quote.

[dorkfish]

short, sweet, and simple =) very nice job

[mysticgmekeepr]

wonderful imagery in 6 little words perfectly strung together

[Wildfleour]

Cool!

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I Sooooooooooooooooo loved this! Passion, passion and more passion. Love it!

[Moonlit-Blues]

Interesting, must've been challenging, slightly mysterious, using 'my cup' as an endearment, left ambigous for the reader to see how they see the cup. Lovely!