can you fell the summer breeze

can you fell the summer breeze

A Poem by Purple Dragon

The summer breeze

 

Can u feel the summer breeze, as it blows?

Blows strait through my feet.

Watch the sunrise here with you

Turns my sky, from grey to blue

 

Chores

I don’t wonna be a princess, baby

I don’t want the fairy-tale ending

I don’t want a fancy house

I don’t want the crown

I don’t want the dress

I just want to impress

So hopefully one day I’ll say yes 

© 2013 Purple Dragon


Author's Note

Purple Dragon
i need help to finish it hopping soneone can help
coment if you like it pls
and igore the spelling thank you :)

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Tea
I love it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Purple Dragon

11 Years Ago

thank you
Tea

11 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
I ignored the spelling(:
This is a nice song to start with though I don't know what to add since I'm not a song writer (:
But it's really nice

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

11 Years Ago

I see, great still
Purple Dragon

11 Years Ago

thank you i have some other one but i have had the time to finish
Rhianne Ney

11 Years Ago

I see (:

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Added on March 29, 2013
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Purple Dragon
Purple Dragon

Havey Bay , Australia



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