Silence

silence, calm and peaceful

silence, annoying and unsustainable

silence, quiet and explanable

silence, awkward and disrespectful

silence, endurable and unavoidable 

silence, harsh and rude

silence, thoughtful and scatttered

silence, a deserted island, lonely colourful but loud

silence, draws me closer to the truth

silence, touches my heart, my soul but hated by me 

Because it is unavoidable, unsustainable and annoying.

Reviews

[Olivia]

This is very beautiful.
It is just enjoyable to read. I sincerely can't wait for more of your writing. nice job!

[The Templar]

An interesting read, overall.

Not the greatest thing I've ever read, but it had a nice flow to it. Word choice was bland, though, and I felt it dragged on a bit to long. But hey, all that matters is that i enjoyed it, as that's what you want an audience to leave with. I wouldn't mind seeing more from you, and I am fully confident you'll improve.

-The Templar