liar liar

read it please and give a review

BECAUSE WHILE I STAND HERE AND LOOK YOU IN THE EYE 

WANTING TO DO NOTHING BUT CRY 

I AM SAD TO SAY THAT I KNOW YOU DIDNT EVEN TRY

THAT YOU DON'T REALLY WANT TO DIE

YOUR THREATS OF THE GREAT ESCAPE 

ARE ALL FALSE WRONG NOT TRUE

AND IF YOU WANTED ME BACK THIS ISNT WHAT YOU WOULD DO 

I DONT KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU

OR WHERE MY MAN WENT 

BUT YOU ARE NO MAN OF MINE

MY HAPPINESS HAS BEEN SPENT 

AND ITS ABOUT TIME

I KNOW WHERE MY HAPPINESS WENT 

I'M NOT GONNA BE JUST FINE 

NO NOT ANYMORE

I'M DONE

I'M SHUTTING THE DAM DOOR 

THIS IS A WAR I HAVE WON 

  

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems, what do you think of the dialogue

Reviews

[Oswald Chesterfield Cob..]

Really emotional, I loved it. It's based on true emotions I can see, hope you feel better soon :) I hope to read more by you soon.

[The poetic child]

THANKS -the 12 yer old