Please dont leave me

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i wont let you leave me 

it would tear me apart 

you have my hearts key 

myself bitter and my  tone tart 

i would cry 

you cant leave 

if you die 

i will have nothing to believe

i will be done with life 

ill make more scars 

with a cold knife 

you are my moon to mars 

 i cant live without you 

i cant and wont 

i couldn't forget what we used to do 

they will tell me dont

they well say get over it 

but i cant i wont 

i will not submit 

so while you fall apart 

i try to put you back together 

i have already went down that road 

i need you to last forever 

i cant go into my old mode 

so please 

ill do anything

i need you 

ill give my everything 

for you 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[RONGORONGO::^/JEUSSEN/F..]

This is a poem of a staircase. It is a crescendo of words that reach the top with feelings and thoughts of love, it twists and turns, and this love is so strong it is too afraid to go all the way back down, especially when it's reached its peak. What a climb! It screams out in afraid agony, please don't leave me, I need you....That is exactly the way I feel about my husband, and I want to always walk the stairs of sand to our own heaven- seas where we met, and climb higher and higher together yet. This poem says, "Never part." It is wonderful, and takes my breath away. I haven't really a true review- I don't know what to say. But I love this.

[The poetic child]

THANK YOU SO MUCH im glad my writing is good -thanks the 12 year old (ALMOST 13)