Farewell Callalily.

Walking along the shore overlooking the beautifully lit horizon
reminiscing back on our youthful times of excitement

I hoarded all of our happiest memories afraid of letting go
But I think it's finally time I let you go

I've made countless mistakes in hopes of being forgiven
Only to make matters worse

A love that was pure and genuine I have once over indulged in
Now dying slowly as I watch it take its last course in it's path
God has chosen

I have prayed that time heals your wounds and comforts your heart
Just know deep inside where most people assume it's dark

Is a soul which holds compassion and empathy trying
to regain control of what he's lost

I will say my farewells and I will always remember you
Here is my blessings and my last message I'll say to you

I now toss the love in which I have for you into the wind
In hopes that you find everlasting love again

Think it's time for me to go,

Farewell, my beautiful Callalily...

Reviews

[Robert Haigh]

Written with feeling, and true expression. Well penned.

[The Fallen King]

Thank you very much.

[Davidgeo]

"I've made countless mistakes in hopes of being forgiven"

That, my friend, is a spectacular line.

[The Fallen King]

Thank you very much.

[Nisreen]

So beautiful and so moving

[The Fallen King]

Thank you.

[Nisreen]

love is about forgiveness though
if she cant forgive you then she doesnt love you Sir

[The Fallen King]

I agree with you.

[Dajena]

A very emotive piece.

The struggle of letting go scorches my heart as I read these lines. I can also feel a strong resolve despite of struggles.

A piece straight from the heart.

[The Fallen King]

Thank you very much.

[Dajena]

You are welcome :)