Dreams.

Wishing upon a distant star for a woman beautifully unique mentally you're a work of art.

The great architect of the universe has heard my prayer filled with empathy you brighten the dark.

I dreamt of finding a woman whose heart is young and her elegance is remarkably angelic.

I dreamt of her soft gentle touches warm kisses lord knows, I will continue wishing for such a pure authentic loving I hope that you are listening.

Her golden blonde hair rich and beautiful her eyes glisten like the pearls of the great seas, she's a calm vibe.

Her physique is perfection as if Michelangelo sculpted it himself, she's a sight. 

Her complexion soft white, as the sand of earth beautifully undiscovered beaches

her voice is so subtle that it leaves me breathless but also speechless

Her smile resembles that of a crescent moon but yet, this what I have dreamt can it be you?

Does she exist or will she ever? Life has its mysterious ways in being clever.

If dreaming is the only you can ever exist then, I shall sleep forever.

You're a dream that I will love to have so we can be always be together.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ahhhhhhhhhhhh young love ...its strong in your poem .. it brings a smile to my old face ..one can only wish your protagonist good fortune in the search of this allusive dream ;)
E.

[The Fallen King]

Thank you for your kind words.

[Celie Rose]

what a beautiful poem. I feel the soul of your theme throughout the entire writing. Your description of the woman is exquisite. I like the dreamy metaphors. The words flow nicely together. "Life has its mysterious ways in being clever. If dreaming is the only you can ever exist then, I shall sleep forever." Well written and expressed. Keep up the fine work!

[The Fallen King]

Thank you!

[Willard Wells]

Good luck on her hearing your words.

[The Fallen King]

Thank you.

[Dajena]

It would be great if there was an audio attached to your poem. I love the rhythm and the places it took me. :)

[The Fallen King]

That would be something to consider!

[Dajena]

Looking forward :)

[The Fallen King]

Awesomeness.

[Dajena]

:).......... :)

[emmajoy]

'.. Her smile resembles that of a crescent moon but ..'

How beautifully you describe your feelings, wrapping them in sweet yet simple phrases, making for sincerity and real emotion, not just fiddling make.believe.

.. If dreaming is the only you can ever exist then, -- -- I shall sleep forever. '

Your writing deserves far more reviews..

[The Fallen King]

Thank you so much! I greatly appreciate your comment. Your words just made my day a whole lot better!!