A new beginning

One can only imagine the aura of the beauty
God has bestowed upon you
A legend only spoken amongst the heavens
to describe such elegance, it's true
A woman hidden from my eyes
finally to be revealed with time
Shes Mysterious and I'm curious to find out
what gives this soul it's fire to breathe life
Don't be afraid I want to whisper a promise
that God only hears through prayer
A whisper of assurance, a vision to envision
new depths and meaning to love, peace, and harmony
Take a moment and listen to hymn
of the beat of my heart
My motives are genuine and pure I'm here
to remove your blemishes and scars
which made us who we are
Let your fire burn wildly in your life
and witness a new beginning arise
A beginning as a new born opening its eyes
A beginning like a sunrise over the horizon
with its warmth to help give purpose and
meaning to all living things on earth
A beginning to show your true inner worth
A beginning to create love again
Will you take my hand and begin this journey
with me forever to the very end.

Reviews

[Nisreen]

Wishing you tons of blessings

this is a beautiful poem

[The Fallen King]

Thank you!

[Willard Wells]

A very beautiful piece written to your love. I like it a great deal.
I have one sentence change for your consideration. I believe less is more, but in this case it may need a little add. Good job.

"Take a moment and listen to hymn of the beat of my heart"

"Take a moment and listen to the hymn of the beat of my heart"

[The Fallen King]

Thank you. I didn't notice that after proof reading 100 times. But thank you. I added the other sentences because I didn't copy my entire poem from the email.

[Willard Wells]

I read my work over and over and I find that no matter how good you are, some things get missed and that is one of the reasons we come here. Critique of our work.

[The Fallen King]

You are right Mr. Wells. I couldnt agree more. Thank you again for the suggestions, remarks also, review. I do appreciate it. Inspired me to write more.