ASLYUM

THERE IS A HELL WITHIN ME.A CHAOS WITHIN THEE.THIS PAIN IS DRIVING ME COMPLETY INSANE.

THIS FEAR AS THE TEARS COME DOWN MY FACE THAT I'LL LOSE MY SAINITY.MY HUMANITY IS FADING AWAY.TODAY.IM SLIPING INTO THE DARKNESS.THE SEDUCTIVE LURE OF THE ETNERNAL DARK NIGHT.TONIGHT.ALL THAT BLEEDS INSIDE ME IS DARKNESS.IM ONLY A MERE SHADOW OF WHO I USED TO BE IM INSANE

Reviews

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

very intriguing and pivotal write. I can imagine this being the voice of one of your vampire characters

[Pryde Foltz]

LL THAT BLEEDS INSIDE ME IS DARKNESS.IM ONLY A MERE SHADOW OF WHO I USED TO BE IM INSANE

Very intriguing write especially when taken in with the title. I suppose insanity is an asylum of sorts, and asylum from feeling the pain of the real world. Great write.

[Arabella Vanskelig]

Sometimes, the best thing you can do is to give in. Trust me, it can do wonders :)

[Latifa]

very dark but well written great one

[genocide]

that's the way i feel right now what did you like about it

[Latifa]

MY HUMANITY IS FADING AWAY.TODAY.IM SLIPING INTO THE DARKNESS.THE SEDUCTIVE LURE OF THE ETNERNAL DARK NIGHT
this part mostly

[genocide]

thanks hon i like your comment