greedy

A Poem by Victoria

I'm sorry I got greedy,

changed the plans.

Didn't want to be

the same old thing.

Developed feelings,

thought about things,

how different they could be.

This time,

we thought different.

I'm sorry I got greedy.

© 2013 Victoria

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Torilee - this was so simple yet so powerful. Not everyone has guts to convey this upfrontly.
Rather we hide when we turn up greedy.
I must say you have posted truth on this page stating you feeling "I'm Sorry I got Greedy" - This line has power and potential to convey what made you turn greedy because we are human so we are needy. Thus, we turn up greedy :)
- Singh :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Torilee - this was so simple yet so powerful. Not everyone has guts to convey this upfrontly.
Rather we hide when we turn up greedy.
I must say you have posted truth on this page stating you feeling "I'm Sorry I got Greedy" - This line has power and potential to convey what made you turn greedy because we are human so we are needy. Thus, we turn up greedy :)
- Singh :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on August 13, 2013
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Victoria

AZ

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I'm Tori. I eat my cereal without milk. I sleep till 12 a.m. I find odd people some what intriguing. I'm quite anti-social so I write. more..

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