thoughts

I didn't think about the long run.

I didn't think you'd be around this long.

I didn't think I would fall for you so quickly.

I didn't think everything would be so complicated.

I didn't think you would be oblivious to the complications.

I didn't think.

Reviews

[Shawn Purcell]

thoughts get us in trouble sometimes. Whether we aco on them of not. this is a nice simple poem about one of our most basic instincts.

[dartford]

I'm loving reading you, what
more can I say? Oh yes, you're
a very gifted writer..damn it,
you're a poet! :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

I like the repetition of "I didn't think," especially ending the poem with it.. It's so true, sometimes we don't think about the consequences, the love, the oblivion... this is a good poem torilee. Keep writing!