Backflash

I put my pen in this white sheet

Of paper meant to hold on tight

The wind blows and my vision is right

On time she comes and feels

The thing that’s hard between the sheets.

He stumbles and falls

Head first on top

Of her she struggles

Beneath the watery marks

On her ashen face.

 

Reviews

[Kesav Easwaran]

Nice creative piece on well imaginative lines...liked

[JC]

powerful, gripping, sad and real.

[Huggy Bear]

Great piece you have here:)

[Rose Tyler]

Good write, good flow, good word choices. Great job!