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Skies were darker, as nights turned blacker.
Mourning the losses and feats were shattered.
Stumbling upon certain things,
Wishing lighter days on the rims.
Dawn was breaking on to the morrow,
Reminiscing past mishaps and the sorrow.

A man came into the darkness,
Swept away the lonely maiden.
Tears of joy and relief not mistaken
Though, twas only a phase was it not?

For how can it not be, when she thought the world of you
And you shatter her with words, unmistakably hurtful?

Reviews

[Rose Tyler]

I'm surprised I'm the first to review this great poem! It has good rhyme and the words choices are great! It flows well, too. There's definitely emotion behind this,and it was very sad... Good write though!