Forever Yours

What is this thing called love?

That men and women flock all over the world

In search of happiness and unyielding passion.

It strives to tell of a wonderful love affair.

But heeds in enjoyment as though one's love is impaired.

As I tell my tale of wonders to come

These feelings succumb to an unnatural ground.

As though love lost can once again be found.

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Such exquisite beauty that flares from within.

The excitement it fills from the pious core

Of the shattered Earth.

 

Fledgelings from above, the mighty heavens of wonder.

The sheer loss of gravity as it falls..

To deep slumber.

 

Lying in its wake

From immortality.

Such a pleasurable torment.

 

To see the light of forever wrapped in your embrace.

Reviews

[Orlando Murcia]

Nice work

You brought of a lot of great

and interesting points


Great work

[Liza]

you are so talented

[Antonio Valentino]

Just like your namesake poetess, love can be topsy turvy can't it?

As it should be.
This was wonderful!

Antonio

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

Such a pleasurable torment.

To see the light of forever wrapped in your embrace.
I really liked this..line
it is so very true..perhaps it is the fear of love that is the real torment the fear of losing that which we love..sigh .
Anyhow well done

[Pax Analog]

Wow!

Topsy, you've married love-desire to the awe of the natural world, the ineffable Kosmos, and the radical intelligence of Consciousness Itself.

"Such exquisite beauty that flares from within./The excitement it fills from the pious core/Of the shattered Earth."

Lightning Mind, soul of indigenous power.

"To see the light of forever wrapped in your embrace."

O yes. Beautiful. Sublime.

[fhamie]

lovely! makes me wanting to be embraced...love..love..love..
well done!

[Hello, Goodbye]

Very nice and delicate in its communication..

[Satellite Heart]

Beautiful. Amazing imagery. I loved EVERYTHING about this poem. thanks for sharing! Awesome, Lovely Write.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Falling , falling ! Through warm space, then
wrapped in loving arms with the heat of kisses
smothering in your charms.

Ahhhhh ! Sweet love. A beautiful , sensuous
recital of how one feels when wrapped in the
arms of your beloved. Incredible !

Rated ---- 100 %

------ Eagle Cruagh

[yo]

You certainly don't seem to be topsyturvy about this thing called love!! Loved it!! Very nice flow!