Dramarama Haven

You cling to me like a pitbull in heat.

Singing songs to make it upbeat.

Think I’ll fall for that simple tactic?

Think twice love, try n make it more dramatic.

 

I am not your property

So don’t be buggin up at me.

Im a simple woman with credentials

I would love a man

Who has great potential.

 

You walk into the room with that sleazy stare

Don’t think I don’t see you glaring way up there.

You see me with him, why do you care?

Is it love your feeling? or love impaired?

 

As I make my rounds in your daily life

I shudder to think that I’m  forever in  a fight

A fight to the death with your conscience it strikes

A battle im losing with my very dear life.

I struggle in vain waiting to break free

From your hard stoned grasp it seems it’ll never be.

Why do you keep me in dire situations?

When I’m  not yours, did I forget to mention ?

And why do I cling to your every word?

Is it not enough for me to get hurt?

Am I this ridiculous? I am such a t**d.

Feelings of distrust makes it even more absurd.

I hunger to feel your body next to mine

But what  do I get? An appetizer and a very cheap wine.

Must it all come to this, with you over there

You give me the scraps I can no longer bear.

Enough is enough I am not your dog.

Arf, arf baby, life is such a drag.

Even more so with you

Of that I’mma brag.

 

Reviews

[A]

WOW! Intense! I loved this poem and your emotions are so clear! I love the title too...don't know why but definitly caught my attention. I really like how you tell him you still have feelings for him and you're longing for him but then you let him know that you are not going to hold onto him. Great poem! :)

And thanks for your review of my poem. Brought a smile to my face :)

[Eagle Cruagh]

I love you !

See, that did`nt hurt.

I love you---- just words, unless , perhaps they
are said by that special someone, the someone
you believe. 'Don`t be afraid of the words.

Rated-----100 %

-----Eagle Cruagh

[J.R Schlievert]

its very vivid and hued :) i can see all the affections in this piece! :) good work!

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Oh I could find so many emotions in this including some humour.. but sadness, anger, ventation, love, dislike, distrust.. and I can see why you want to run from this one. Love can be a rollercoaster ride at some times but the track should not break off or hit such lows as to make us feel cheap or used. Such passion in your simple terminology.. that can certainly hit every heart's note that has been through this. Have to look past the skin.. look way deeper within.. living with a clownish doll.. you can't pay to make one fall!!!! Hahaha and great work.. keep it up.. you have such a charismatic personality and charm that flows!