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Teetering on the brink of immortality

A new wave has made its subtle presence known.

The feel of your ever lasting energy

Consumes the fire deep in the depths of my soul.

Writhing as it is, and not in the pain

But in the fire of hope your love has given me

The rich taste and scent of you

Still lingers like crazy on my unkempt soul

Every breath you take leaves me searing in the heat of your love

How I happened to let you go

Is beyond me.

The ache in which you promised to satiate

Leaves me breathless till I succumb to your presence once more.

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[deeps]

Could feel yoru emotional write very well expressed, like this